I like the enthusiasm Owen! I would add some background noise if possible. Possibly guitar, or piano?
Great job but I think it would benefit from some soft music in the background
I really like a pool of it is very engaging. Keep up the excellent work! PS I like the image on your landing page.
Great job but I agree with charlie that you need music. Otherwise great writing.
Great job reciting your piece! Although i think some music would gi along great with it!
Good audio quality. It sounds like you need to practice a bit more before reciting. Also, post the words.
You havn't posted in a long time. no music, but that is fine. more practice will help.
This is a very rich and deep poem. You use a lot f emotion, which makes your recitation very engaging.
Good poem but you should stay the same distance from the mic the whole time.
The only thing I would say is that this sounds kind of forced. I think you did a good job with this though, just make sure you make it natural.
very deep and inspiring poem, I could hear the emotion through your voice
great reciting, I can't wait to listen to it today!
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